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Feeling so empty
You’re words
Echoing through my head
The venom of pain
Flowing through my veins

My blood
Like poison
It spells the end
Of me

Our souls embrace
Once more
You’re heart full
Of love and pain

My heart
In my throat
Chocking me
As I try to speak

Gouging out my eyes
So that I am as blind
As I feel right now
And also so that
No one will see
My demised soul

A rage
I heard I hate
I want to cry
I want to scream
I want to hate
Myself away
©2004-2009 ~Faint-69
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Um... do i realy have to explain

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:iconfloating-pancake:
"I want to hat
Myself away"
very powerful ending

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:floating:

:::Am I falling Or failing?:::

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:iconanarkissed:
awesome - i like this part:

'My heart
In my throat
Chocking me
As I try to speak'

oh and by the way, it's 'choking' =)

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Heh, i'm like the only person here without a sig.

Oh wait.
:iconanarkissed:
oh and nice pic too. good choice of clothing for the poem!

...and cuz of the ciggy. hehe.

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Heh, i'm like the only person here without a sig.

Oh wait.
:iconfaint-69:
thanks i was hoping that it would hit hard

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I'm getting feelings I'm hiding too well
(Bury the horse shaped shell)
Something broke inside my stomach
I let the pieces lie just where they fell

Porcupine Tree - Open Car

~FåïNt-69™~
:iconfaint-69:
thanks mate, oh and by the way shut up you perfectionist i know i cant spell :fork: :fork: :fork: =P

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I'm getting feelings I'm hiding too well
(Bury the horse shaped shell)
Something broke inside my stomach
I let the pieces lie just where they fell

Porcupine Tree - Open Car

~FåïNt-69™~
:iconfaint-69:
lol thanks, haha yeah gotta luv the ciggy :D

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I'm getting feelings I'm hiding too well
(Bury the horse shaped shell)
Something broke inside my stomach
I let the pieces lie just where they fell

Porcupine Tree - Open Car

~FåïNt-69™~
:iconpoisongirl112:
I like this one alot. It's different. Im gonna :+fav: it.
my fav part is...

My blood
Like poison
It spells the end
Of me

... yeah and the ciggy is enticing. It's teasing me coz I just had my last one lol.

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href="http://www.myspace.com/christinemeadows ">MySpace
:iconfaint-69:
lol, well thanks a lot for the fav

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I'm getting feelings I'm hiding too well
(Bury the horse shaped shell)
Something broke inside my stomach
I let the pieces lie just where they fell

Porcupine Tree - Open Car

~FåïNt-69™~
:iconrosebud1313:
Great photo... You're so sad... I wish I could do something for you. I am here if you need to talk...

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Love,
Sandy:rose:

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