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Enclosed by this endless darkness
Yet I feel like love has
Awakened me from the grave
You gaze at me and with one smile
Lift me into the light

Shadows dance around me
As I stair upon the flame
Made so bright by our love
I’ve died a thousand deaths
But as always I’m rescued by your smile

Each and every time…

With you by my side
I can’t stay down
Just cannot give in and say I’m done
So take my hand and gaze upon my eyes
Whilst I say “I love you

You may get scared from time to time
But put your hand to my heart
Beating so fast and feel for just a second
Before realising what we have is real
And there is no reason to fear

I am here for you, now and always…

Time may have been stolen
From us at this moment in time
But I’m not done yet
Give me a chance my darling
And I’ll set this right
©2004-2009 ~Faint-69
:iconfaint-69:

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Read and find out...

Havent Submitted anything in a while, and ive had this on my desk for a while. So I wrote it up on the computer and submitted it. Critique is welcome, thanks.

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:icondarknessbride:
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! :)
Congratulations!!! I'm sure that she will give u another chance!!
:hug:
:icondonotkilldemons:
:+favlove:

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Morning will come. Just pray you're there to see it.
:icondead-quiet:
very nice! well written!
:icondaveeg:
A good job as always. Powerful betimes. I know it may not be the main point here, but I myself am a firm believer in second chances heh.
:iconthemuffinyamber:
:aww: Aww. Awesome poem, as usual. :) (p.s. I've submitted a new poem)

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I would put, "I don't care," but that would indicate that I do indeed care, and that I would want you to read that.
"Tacos are like ... sex covered in salsa."- =thundercake
:iconvalo666:
This is awesome. I can see alot of influence from HIM. it's actually kinda like what i write if i try and do this sorta stuff.
:iconfaint-69:
Yeah, although HIM isnt the only influence in it. Theres also influences from type o negative and katatonia

--
I'm getting feelings I'm hiding too well
(Bury the horse shaped shell)
Something broke inside my stomach
I let the pieces lie just where they fell

Porcupine Tree - Open Car

~FåïNt-69™~
:iconfaint-69:
thank you :)

--
I'm getting feelings I'm hiding too well
(Bury the horse shaped shell)
Something broke inside my stomach
I let the pieces lie just where they fell

Porcupine Tree - Open Car

~FåïNt-69™~
:iconfaint-69:
thank you :)

--
I'm getting feelings I'm hiding too well
(Bury the horse shaped shell)
Something broke inside my stomach
I let the pieces lie just where they fell

Porcupine Tree - Open Car

~FåïNt-69™~
:iconfaint-69:
:aww: thanks so much hun :)

--
I'm getting feelings I'm hiding too well
(Bury the horse shaped shell)
Something broke inside my stomach
I let the pieces lie just where they fell

Porcupine Tree - Open Car

~FåïNt-69™~

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